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The last time I posted this there were close to 646 views and NO RESPONSES OR REPLIES which kind of left me bewildered. :question: I thought people wanted to see something different, and unique. This is not your typical super heroine story. This has more elements of spirituality, mysticism, and a romantic approach. The elements of action and peril will be coming up the good stuff is coming. Also the issue the the super heroine is African American also puts a spin on things. Recently I read a blog or a post somewhere where the question why are there not more African American super heroines or action heroines present. Which is true in the media they are almost non existent and in the comics they are scarce besides the already common one's STORM, BLACK PANTHER, etc. I would greatly appreciate some feedback on this because I am considering making a production from this and would like to know if this is the right approach.

LOG LINE: An African American slave is granted power from a mythical cat goddess to become a champion for the innocent and punish-er of the guilty. KNOW HER NAME....

Special thanks to Superpics4less for the inspirational story on this site TALES OF THE CAT.

FADE IN:

EXT. CITY SKYLINE - NIGHT

A figure is silhouetted against the background of the city
on top of the highest building. S

ALINA
It is said that each of us have a
calling. That our purpose defines
our legacy.

Revealed are pair of black feet on ledge of a building, then
a set of claws an attractive pair of legs a revealing torso
which seems to be in fur.

ALINA (VO)
Each of us shapes our destiny.

There is a lightening strike which reveals a set of glowing
green eyes.

ALINA (VO)
Mine began 300 years ago.

The figure leaps towards the screen it's claws slashing
forward sound of a SLASH.


EXT. FIELD - DAY

SUPER- CRANE PLANTATION SAVANNAH GEORGIA..

Several African American's are working in the fields under
the hot sun. Some are raking the ground with hoes others are
picking berries in the bushes under the hot sun. An female
is working struggling with a bush she is in her early 20's
attractive ALINA. A female slave slighly older 30's comes
to her.

FEMALE SLAVE
Child you going to kill this here
bush and cut yo hand up from all
them prickles there. Here's a
trick just tilt it like this and
give a little shake they falls
right out.

She demonstrates and the berries fall to the ground.

ALINA
Y.Yes mam thanks you kindly mam.

She goes back to her work when a PLANTATION HAND comes up
the trail to the field. Some of the slaves look up from
their chores he looks at them and walks right past them he
approaches the berry orchard. He stops and looks straight at
Alina notices and freezes from her task.

PLANTATION HAND
(pointing at Alina)
You come with me right now .

Alina gives her basket to the female slave who touches her
with compassion. The other slaves are watching the scene as
Alina slowly goes the Plantation Hand. The Plantation Hand
escorts her away while looking back at the slaves.

PLANTATION HAND
Go on back to work with you
nothing to see here.

He escorts her toward away from the orchard.

PLANTATION HAND
Misses wants a word with you gal.
You must done something.

Alina looks worried as she looks around a little concerned.


INT. HOUSE - DAY

The living quarters of the mansion. The estate of Harker
Crane the multi-millionaire of Georgia prominent figure in
the state.
Alina is standing before Beth Crane Mid 30's. Beth sits in a
chair.

BETH CRANE
You can relax Alina it's OK.

She dismisses the plantation hand. Alina looks around
nervously her head is down and such. Beth comes to her and
gently picks her head up.

BETH CRANE
(smiling)
It's alright. You have nothing to
scared of.

ALINA
Mam?

BETH CRANE
Please Alina call me Beth. Please
call me Beth.

ALINA
Y.Yes.. B.B.Beth.

BETH CRANE
Your a young attractive girl to be
working and toiling out in those
fields so. That's not for a young
lady such as yourself.

Alina looks at her puzzled

BETH CRANE
Me and the Mr were talking the
other day before he got called
away on urgent business and we
feel your position should be in
the house. You wouldn't be a
housekeeper but sort of Nanny for
our children. You have been
working hard and such we feel you
would be the perfect candidate.
You see my husband is soon going
to be running for senate and I
need to work with him so we'll be
gone for a good many days and no
one to watch the children.

ALINA
Oh.. I ..see..

BETH CRANE
You've never been in here before
have you?

ALINA
N.N.N.No not really. I just pasted
by it a few times when we were
going into town and such.Its the
biggest thing I seen ever seen.

BETH CRANE
Well girl.You'll have full run of
the house.Now I need a decision
immediately we are pulling out in
a few days and I want to make sure
matters here are settled.

A young man steps out from the kitchen area, mid-late 20's
STEVEN CRANE.

STEVEN
And I'll take good care of her ma.
Real good care.

Alina backs away a little nervous.

BETH CRANE
Get away with you now. Get away
boy. If your pa caught you he'd
tan your hide fer sure.

Steven saunters away looking after her.

STEVEN
Don't worry yalla girl. You'll be
mine soon enough half breed.

Alina looks nervous as Beth violently storms at him.

BETH CRANE
GET OUT NOW BEFORE I BRAIN YA.

Beth tries to comfort Alina.

MONTAGE of Aliana performing household chores as well as
being a nanny.

ALINA (VO)
Now suppose here is where I tell
you somethings. See I really don't
know much about my folks. Which is
why I am kind of lighter than the
other colored folks. I don't know
much about my folks. My mother was
Indian or sorts of and my father I
was told was a white man. Now I
don't know if she was his masta or
what. All I know is I was given up
for fear that if word got out
about him and her well that just
wasn't proper them times. And I
know the man had a good relation
with the Cranes. So I was passed
to them. My mother don't know much
about what happen to her or
somethin. The Cranes were like
family to me. Although I was a
slave they sometimes give me
special privileges and such. All
thou to keep it discrete from the
others. Last thing for master to
be involved in is trouble.

She is carrying some buckets of water down the stairs when
she sees Steven a few miles down walking with some bags.

ALINA (VO)
See it's been these seven months.
I done real good for these folks.
That one day the massa surprise
me. He took me out into the fields
and showed me and old shack. Well
now I am thinking the worst. Old
masta gonna have his way with me.
But he took me inside and I
couldn't believe my eyes. It was
like one of them paintings you
see, very how do they say it??
e-l-e-gent. There was a bed, a
small table, a little stove an
indoor well, and some bathing
things. Masta said this was my
little house for doing such a good
job and such. It used to be an old
storage shed but he ordered some
of his hands to make it for me. I
couldn't believe it. The misses
had made given me some fresh
linens to and all pure cotton. Now
instead of picking it I was laying
in it.


EXT. FIELD - NIGHT

Alina is walking back to her home from the main house. She
slows as she passes another smaller house Steven is out on
the front looking up at the night sky.

STEVEN
(drunkenly)
Lovely night yalla girl. How about
you and me..

Alina rushes away as Steven laughs at her. As she's running
his laughter echos in her head.

ALINA (VO)
Now that boy Steven. BAD all
around B-A-D. He's like the devil
be comin to town. In a way the
Cranes blame themselves. They
raised and spoiled that boy until
one day he just rebelled. I do
think he killed somebody befo
there was talk about it. It was
said he lost his temper one night
on a slave and just.. but they
covered its up and so cause of the
trouble it would raise with the
massa. But final straw was he done
struck his stepmother Misses
Crane. And ole massa lost it. Put
him out of the house and banned
from ever coming back in only for
them special holidays. You know
the big one happy family image or
something? Masta made a house for
him on the land and that's where
he would stay. Still that boy
scares me so

She reaches her house and stops at the front door. She pants
a little. As recollects a moment.


EXT. THE BARN FLASHBACK - DAY

SUPER- 8 YEARS AGO.

Aliana is carrying some buckets as she passes near the barn
Steven is working with some bales inside.

STEVEN
Hey gal come here a minute and
please help me with this.

Alina stops and looks at him hesitantly.

STEVEN
Come on gal. This to heavy for me
alone besides I got splints in my
hand now for carrying it. I kill
myself carrying it all the way to
the other side.

ALINA
I-I don't know.

STEVEN
For chris sake girl what am I
gonna do. I am not playing around.
Gotta get this work done for paw
comes. Look I'll keep the door
open how's that there for I wont
try any silly business ok.

Alina thinks for a moment and crosses to the barn before she
enters he grabs her and throws her in.


INT. BARN - DAY

Steven has his hand over Alina's mouth while Alina is
helpless.

STEVEN
Now bee's silent girl. Be silent I
say! You looking all good girl
struttin across the plantation
turning many a guys heads. Yeah I
seen you. Looking all innocent and
such so pure for a colored gal.
But you know I wants some
chocolate.

He lifts her skirt up and strokes underneath her legs while
she tries to struggle. She bites his hand and stomps on his
foot. He screams and releases his grip. She tries to run but
he grabs her by her hair and throws her against the wall she
hits it hard and falls to the ground. Steven angered grabs a
cat o nine tail from the hook and lashes her.

STEVEN
YOU BLACK BITCH. I'LL TEACH YOU
SOME RESPECT FOR THE WHITE MAN.

He lashes her once then again, she crawls trying to get away
but he lashes her leg she screams. Steven raises the whip to
lash her again when a strong pair of arms grab Steven. It is
JIM CRANE. Early-Mid 30's and several HANDS. Jim punches
Steven with force Steven flies across the room and crashes
against the wall. Jim and several hands escort a battered
shaken Alina back up.

JIM
There there girl you safe now.
You're alright now. Don't worry
girl. I'll tan him real good for
this. This,

Looking at Steven with hatered.

JIM
You.. You are filth. You are
swine...
You are the dirt of the earth boy.
You get away with to much not this
time. This time you gonna know
PAIN.

He address the hands.

JIM
Take her back to her house.

ALINA
But sir my chores.

JIM
(smiling)
Don't you worry none about that
now you hear? Your done for the
day. Steven gonna finish your work
that is if he can still walk after
this.

He address the hands.

JIM
Take her out and close that door.

The hands comply as she walks past Steven, Steven looks at
her with deep hatred that it chills her. As she is being
escorted out side. There are sounds of a whip and screams of
intense pain.


EXT. HOUSE - NIGHT

End Flashback. Alina is in a cold sweat.


EXT. AN ORCHARD - DAY

Super 4 Years later.

ALINA (VO)
Now there's this saying I heard.
There's someone for everyone. I
never believed it. Especially
working on this here land. But
Misses say sometimes that special
one's right under you. They taught
me to read and write. Everyday for
2 hours I had what you call school
me and several other negroes whom
they had chosen. It was there I
met him.. And it was as you say..
magic.

She embraces an stunning African American slave WALT
early-Mid 20's.

The following is a montage of Alina and Walt in happier
times swimming in the lake, picnic under a large tree in the
meadows, sharing each others chores while Beth and Walt
observe in approval. Taking a carriage ride thoughout the
country side.

ALINA (VO)
Walt was the masters
driver.Actually it was the master
who introduced us.


INT. HOUSE - NIGHT

Alaina and Walt are cuddled up on the floor.

WALT
That as a damn fine dinner a fine
dinner.

ALINA
Knew you liked it. Beans mighty
fresh this year and the pork
finest cuts the master could get.

WALT
(a thought)
Can you imagine doin this forever.
I mean really forever. Me being
here all the time

ALINA
Why Walt Peters whatever do you
mean.

Walt reaches into his pocket and pulls out a ring and puts
it on her finger Alina is overwhelmed.

WALT
Ol master and misses knew of it
when I told him first. Ol master
bought this ring. He said I should
tell you when we were alone..
well.. girl.. Now we are alone..
Will you? ..

Alina embraces him.

ALINA
You know the answer Walt Peters.
You know the answer!


EXT. MAIN HOUSE - DAY

A wedding ceremony is in effect. It is somewhat elegant. As
the slaves and members of the house are present. Steven is
away from the crowd watching from under a tree with deep
hatred in his eyes. Beth is present but not Jim. There is
jumping the broom ceremony and everyone applauds and such as
Alina and Walt embrace each other.


INT. THE MAIN HOUSE - NIGHT

The celebration is winding down..

WALT
I need to get back to the house
for prepare for our special night
you can still stay here for a
while.

ALINA
Oh no let me come honey.

WALT
(stopping her)
Then it won't be a suprise now
will it. Just wait an hour more
then come.

He kisses her.

WALT
Good things come to those who
wait.

ALINA
(teasing)
It better Walt Peters. It better.

He leaves, Beth comes to her.

BETH CRANE
Where's Prince Charming off to?

ALINA
To prepare for our special night.

BETH CRANE
(sighing)
Ah young love. Jim and I were like
that.. once...

BETH CRANE
(cont)
No I'm joking. It's just that he's
been gone so many times and this
time he would have loved to see
this your moment but..

ALINA
Don't you fret it none miss. He's
gonna be a big man in Washington
soon. Hopefully change things..

They laugh.

BETH CRANE
Well he said you'll get your gift
when he gets back. He didn't tell
me what it was but it's big he
says. I see the party is dying
out. Before you go. The children
want to see your band and wedding
ring.

ALINA
Then I shall not upset them so.

They head upstairs.


EXT. COUNTRY ROAD - NIGHT

Aliana is slowly walking back to her house. She is dreamily
humming a song. As she twirls about the fields carefree. She
passes Stevens house but doesn't see him out front in his
usual drunken stupor. She approaches her cabin and notices
candles lit and such. She quickens her pace expecting the
unexpected. She slowly approaches the door giggling silently
and bursts through it but doesn't find Walt in the bed. Ben
is on the floor 3 gun blasts 2 in chest and one in his head.
There is a widening pool of blood beneath him. She screams
and falls by his side screaming and crying hysterically. A
figure emerges from the doorway. It is Steven holding the
smoking pistol grinning and giggling wickedly.

STEVEN
(threatening)
If I can't have you.. NO ONE
WILL... EVER!

Alina looks at him for a moment then a wild frenzy stirs in
her. Her greenish eyes seems to glow for a moment and she
screams like an animal like a great cat this kind of stuns
Steven for a moment as Alina leaps on him with fury. They
tumble out the door and fall outside on the ground outside
of the house. Elaina rips into Steven clawing at him with
her fingernails at his face. Steven overpowers her and
punches Alina across the face and sends her sprawling. He
stands up and retrives his gun.

STEVEN
(cursing.)
BLACK BITCH. YOU CAN JOIN YOUR
HUSBAND THEN!!!

Alina closes her eyes waiting for the end. She utters a
prayer silently. There is a loud roar and Stevens screams
are heard. There is a fierce sound or ripping and shredding
flesh and the screams continue then are silent. A figure
touches her hand, Alina slowly opens her eyes and sees a
glowing figure before her it is feamle but with a catlike
appearance.

ALINA
Sckhmet you have come......

Alina passes out.

SCKHMET
I have never abandoned you child.


INT. CABIN -CONTINUOUS - NIGHT

Alina slowly wakens to see Sckhmet standing over the remains
of Walt. Aliana rushes to him and comforts him.

ALINA
NO NO WHY HIM? WHY HIM?

SCKHMET
Evil knows no bounds child.It
consumes and destroys it has no
emotion.

ALINA
How did you come to me.

SCKHMET
Your soul. I could feel your rage
when you attacked that man. I
watch over all my children.

ALINA
Steven?!

SCKHMET
No more. He torments you no more.

SCKHMET
You cried out for justice. That's
why I have come. Your soul
tortured.

ALINA
Yes..

SCKHMET
Those who keep you in bondage.

ALINA
Bondage? Oh no. The master and the
missus? They good people gave me
so much.

SCKHMET
But they not free you child. You
are still their slave. They can't
let you go..

ALINA
No No not true. They good people.

SCKHMET
You are a slave to them other wise
they would have released you now.

She touches Alina's hand gently

SCKHMET
Look into my eyes child and search
the truth within yourself.

Alina is mesmerized by Sckhmet's powerful hypnotic glare
through her shinny cat eyes. Alina recoils in shock.

ALINA
(stuttering)
No.. No..It's not possible.

SCKHMET
You have a destiny child. A
destiny that far exceeds anything
else. You are the chosen.

ALINA
Chosen.

SCKHMET
Against evil. RISE MY CHILD AN
BECOME...

Schhmet raises her arms and a force lifts Alina upward
almost as if invisible strings are pulling her. Sckhmet
utters various words in a foreign language that begin to
Alter Alina she begins to feel relaxed and in a somber
state. Soft silent winds begin to form a funnel encasing
Alina's body. Her body becomes more muscular her ears
elongate her eyes transform more catlike greenish yellow.
Her face transforms into more catlike features. Her teeth
elongate fangs, he hands transform into like paws with razor
black claws. Her feet and legs become more muscular as her
body becomes dark. A belt appears on her waist that is solid
gold but forms into a circle pattern. Each circle has an
emerald like jewel that glows when touched. A black bikini
type top and special cloth forms around her body. The cloth
is transformed into a shinny opaque shinny material that
weaves around Alina's legs forming a underpants type
formation. A golden necklace forms around her neck and stops
before her breast area. The transformation is complete. She
is no longer Alaina.

Alina comes out of her deep sleep.

ALINA
Wha, What's..

She notices the transformation.

ALINA
What? What did you do to me..

SCKHMET
Your destiny.

Alina begins to feel her body and such move about the room.

ALINA
I. I. I feel freer, stronger,
more..
more powerful. This what I wear
doesn't tear, it feels so strong.

She lets out a roar to shake the small cabin.

She attempts various acrobatics, stunts, climbing up rafters
with ease doing feats with her body that seem inevitable.

ALINA
I.. I feel.. FREEEEEEE......I am
no longer Alina but call me
FELINE.

She jumps down from the rafters landing on her feet. The
emeralds on her golden belt begin to glow and transform her
back to Alina.

ALINA
This is wonderful. It's like I've
been reborn.

SCKHMET
Which you have child.

Alina senses something.

ALINA
But I sense evil is present here.

SCKHMET
That you have child. For your
tormentor has not perished yet.

Alina's temper rages and the belts emeralds glow
transforming her back into Feline. Schkhmet reveals a
bloodied Steven as she throws him to the floor. Steven
gurgles staggers. He looks up and is struck by a powerful
blow he flies across the room and crashes against the
wall.Steven regains his sight and sees a cat woman in front
of him.

STEVEN
W.W.W.What the hell.

ALINA
Hell is just the beginning for
you.

She grabs him and throws him against the other part of the
room. She runs leaps and pounces on him.

STEVEN
What the hell is this.

ALINA
Your nightmare.. and JUSTICE. For
the death of that man.

She reveals the remains of WALT.

ALINA
You murdered an innocent man
because of your jealously over
some slave girl you knew you could
never have. You destroyed her
world her life the only thing she
truly ever loved taken by your
hand.

STEVEN
Hey look I was drunk and just
pissed off when I saw him I just
wanted to talk but..

ALINA
Your stench of evil is rotten to
the core. Nothing innocent about
you Steven. For that Justice must
take it;s course.

She beats and mutilates him in which a bloody grotesque
corpse remains.

Schhmet reappears.

ALINA
It is done.

SCKHMET
Now must finally leave this place,
never to return and begin your new
existence as a crusader for the
innocent and punisher of the
guilty.

The emeralds on the belt glows and reverse back to Alina.

ALINA
(thinking a moment
in a panic)
Oh how am I going to explain
this... Wait. I'll burn this place
to the ground that's the only way.
The way I killed Steven will be
hard to prove a knife wounds did
that.

Alina rushes and throws what little belongings she has in a
bag. And grabs a bottle of lantern oil and douses the cabin
with it.


EXT. FIELD CONTINUOUS - NIGHT

Aliana is watching the cabin burn in the night sky as the
attraction grabs other others to the scene. Sckhmet appears
to her.

SCKHMET
Go my child. Go and never look
back. That world doesn't exist
anymore. I'll always be with you..

Sckhmet fades from the scene. Alaina looks back one last
time. A couple of tears run down her face for her now dead
husband. She sets sets of on the dark country road
destination unknown.

The next serious of scenes are a MONTAGE of Feline in action
over Alina's VO.

ALINA (VO)
And so it begun. I was going to be
no one's slave ever again.I went
down the cross country and hid in
the swamps and marshes until
slavery was abolished. But many
felt the wrath of Feline. Most
called me the devil in the dark.
There was plenty of evil in the
world. I was a legend starting to
grow. For the next 100 years
FELINE became a word that feared
the night.


EXT. MARSH - NIGHT

SUPER- JUNE 1908.

A couple of townsfolk are leading a prisoner to a tree. They
tie him up.

PRISIONER
You, You can't do this. This is
inhuman.

TOWN FOLK 2
Really? no less inhuman to those
poor children you murdered
bastard.

TOWN FOLK 1
This is Justice.

TOWN FOLK 3
Relax I'm sure there be some of
you left to bury..

The towns folk leave laughing, leaving the prisoner tied to
the tree under the blood red moon night. The prisoner
appears to be very scared. The stillness of the swamp. Until
there is a piercing glowing greenish/yellow eyes peer out
from the fog. Then vanish. Then a claw grabs the mans neck
from above.

ALINA (OS)
My you've been a real bad boy.
Your stench reeks of it.

PRISIONER
P.P.Please have mercy.

ALINA
I'm not your savior I'm your
executioner.

He flies upward into the tree sound of shredding tearing of
flesh is heard and screams.


EXT. THE SWAMP - NIGHT

Feline is on the prowl lurking throughout the swamp when the
goddess Sckhmet appears to her.

FELINE
Great Goddess your presence honors
me to be your servant.

SCKHMET
Arise child. For I bring you news.

FELINE
Yes?

SCKHMET
For you have been residing to long
in the darkness as a predator. For
you must return to existence of
mankind and live out as one of
them.

FELINE
But how will I do this. I mean
look at me. I'm not exactingly
human now am I?

Sckhmet raises her hands and light forms around FELINES
waist it is solid gold belt which forms a circular motion
around her waist. Also on the belt are emerald rubies that
seem to be glowing. They transform Alina back into her
regular human form.

ALINA
I'm me again.

SCKHMET
Yes you must go to reside among
the good and evil. It won't be
easy. Even thou slavery has been
abolished there still those with
that mentality. And those must
allowed a chance to alter their
ways for they are not truly wicked
but misguided. Start with the
smaller towns first for practice.

ALINA
(pointing to her
rags)
But look at me. If I go anywhere
they will lock me up for sure.

SCKHMET
Touch the belt again.

Alina does and immediately she is dressed properly.

ALINA
So I am guessing there is a
difference between sin and evil?

SCKHMET
Yes a great difference. All
mankind sins but not all are evil.
You will learn the difference soon
enough.

ALINA
Then I am off then. Tell me
goddess. Why was I chosen for
this.

SCKHMET
My child everyone has a calling.
Yours came at the right time.
Don't question why child just
embrace and accept it,

ALINA
(jokingly)
So will I see you in another 100
years or so?

SCKHMET
My child I am always here. And my
child you will find happiness
again and this time no one shall
ever take that away from you.

She fades. Alina is standing smiling knowing that her
immortal existence has a purpose now hope.


EXT. STREETS OF NEW YORK - DAY

Super-THE PRESENT.
Alina is attractive as ever considering she is over 200
years old. She is walking down the street carrying a brief
case trying to adjust to big city life. .

ALINA (VO)
So this is New York. Now I know
why they call it the big apple
cause it is BIG! Lots changed over
200 years. My skills have
improved. I managed to earn 2
degrees plus I have a cushy
position at a prestigious firm. I
also have a part time job teaching
African American History at NYU.
Them history books are a joke.
I've also gotten more powerful. I
can detect an evil presence in the
city and when it leaves so I can
now go hunt and punish it. My
legend has grown so there were a
short lived comic book about me in
the mid 1950's a short lived tv
series only 3 episodes. It's was
so that in one of the most violent
towns during the 1970's I'd
decrease the crime rate to 1% and
those were just small petty stuff.
Yes I'd spared lives to. There
were some rumors that I was a
superhero or something. Well I
don't think of myself as no hero.
But even so. I only kill if
necessary. I don't kill to get a
thrill out of it. Even my hypnotic
powers have improved. I can wipe
clean someones memory of my
existence which is good. Last
thing I need are cops on my ass.
But it's good now life as meaning
again.


EXT. CITY ALLEYWAYS - NIGHT

Feline is on top of the roof of the building crouched
against the ledge.

FELINE (VO)
The nicest thing about Alina
working for the prestigious law
firm is she gets to view the
naughty list. Those that have
laughed in face the face justice.
That's where I come in. Example a
slime named Ernesto Trask. "Evil
Ernie known in the underworld. A
sleaze armed robbery, assault,
even the NYPD, and he murdered his
date for not giving him sexual
pleasure. This guy going down.

Feline leaps off the ledge.


EXT. A CLUB - NIGHT

A sleaze club in the water front section. Feline lands on
the roof of the building. Athletically shimmers down the
drain the pipe and trans forms her self back into Alina She
has tracked Ernesto to the club. Ernesto and a few other
thugs enter.


INT. CLUB - NIGHT

ERNESTO
Ya man. I'm telling you. After
tomorrow when we pull of this
heist we'll be living phat man
phat. Everything in motion?

THUG 2
Yeah making final stakeout the
place now boss.

THUG 1
Well hit hard and fast they won't
know who hit them.

ERNESTO
Yeah man well last thing I need
are fuck ups. Piss me the fuck off
man. This bitch I wasted you know.
Pissed me off man. I treat her
nice you know take her out on the
town the best wine and dine you
know. And after all that the bitch
don't put out. Well hell no. After
I spent MY DOUGH on her. And she
try to leave and I stop her and
she slap me? THE BITCH SLAP ME.
Well I gave a total beat down
but.. He-he.. guess I don't know
my own strength sometimes. But
shit man. She had it coming. NO
ONE FUCKS me over NO ONE and
LIVES.

THUG 3
Yeah but what about this cat
person or something. Legend has it
she kills the wicked, they call
her the devil in the dark, night
stalker.. etc. .

ERNESTO
Mannn.. If there is ever a real
life Cat person.. and that bitch
shows up in my city? I;ll give her
a smackdown then I'll have a
little fun then I'll waste her
ass.

They laugh as Alina hears this. In the background.Her eyes
narrow.


EXT. APARTMENT BUILDING - NIGHT

A figure leaps on the roof and down into the skylight.


INT. APARTMENT- - NIGHT

A somewhat dilapidated apartment. Ernesto is watching TV
drinking a beer when there is a scratching on the door. He
stops looks towards the door pays it no mind then turns his
attention back to the television. The scratching starts
again harder. harder. Ernesto agitated jumps up from the
seat removes his gun.

ERNESTO
Ok listen who ever you are
starting shit. I'm pissed, pissed
drunk that it and I have something
you won't want if you don't stop
the shit

He flings the door open there is no one there. He looks down
the long dark hallway in both directions.

ERNESTO
Come on and out and meet my little
friend. Come on you and me. We're
alone no one else here. I rule the
building.. HA HA.

He closes the door.

FELINE (OS)
You got that right gruesome.

Ernesto turns and a fist slams into his face. The blow sends
him crashing into the living room. He staggers from the
blow and sees FELINE crouched on the couch.

FELINE
We're all alone. Oh what's a
matter big boy? Cat got your
tongue?

ERNESTO
Hey.. Hey.. You.. You.. dat cat
chick...

FELINE
Wow. Ugly and smart

Ernesto tries to go for his gun but Feline leaps from the
couch on to him and tackles him they crash over a table on
to the floor she mounts him. And punches him a couple of
times. Then she grabs him and lifts him up. Carries him to
window and leaps out towards the roof.


EXT. ROOFTOP - NIGHT

Ernesto go hurling on the rooftop as the cat lands in a
crouch.

FELINE
Best we do this out here. No use
destroying a apartment right. Now
what was that about you giving me
a smackdown and having your way
then wasting my ass. Well come on
tough guy.

ERNESTO
Oh I'll do more than waste you
you.. cat bitch!

He charges at her she jumps and leaps over his head and
shoots her leg out kicking him in the process. The blow
sends him hurtling towards the edges of the roof. He stops
and recovers. He charges her again she leaps and delivers a
round house kick then a back kick a couple of punches which
stagger him then runs and jumps upon him and falls backward
taking his weight with her legs and flips him over she lands
on top of him. Crashing down. She strikes his face with her
claws and punches with her fist. Ernesto tries to pry her
legs from straddling him but they are to strong.

ERNESTO
What the hell are you made out of?

FELINE
Sugar and spice and everything
nice. Endgame for you Ernie.

ERNESTO
FUCK Y,,,

Feline mutilates him beyond recognition. His screams alert
the several neighborhood buildings as the lights of several
buildings come on. The cat quickly drags his remains to
building and scratches a note on piece of paper and sticks
it to his genitals.It reads. EVIL WILL NEVER REIN IN
FELINE'S DOMAIN.

FELINE
Corny but effective. I'll get more
creative next time.

She hangs his corpse over the side and leaps off the roof.


EXT. APARTMENT BUILDING - NIGHT

Several NYPD are on the scene of the previous incident.
Several officers are removing Ernesto's corpse. An OFFICER
comes to a hard boiled detective late 30'S. DETECTIVE CORT.

OFFICER 1
Sir we retrieved this from the
remains.

DETECTIVE CORT
(reading)
No evil shall remain in Feline's
domain. Great.. What do we have
now another costumed vigilatee
playing superhero.

OFFICER 2
I heard stories growing up of this
catwoman person.

OFFICER 3
Yeah so did I.. Growing up down
south they called her FELINE
right?

OFFICER 1
Yeah it was called the devil in
the dark and such. Could detect
evil.

DETECTIVE CORT
Oh for the love of.You're saying
the a real life cat woman is here
in New york? You all are...

He goes off ranting.

The next following sequences are a MONTAGE of sequences of
FELINE in action battling villains and performing heroic
acts that captivate the city.

NEWS REPORTER 2
And again this mysterious cat like
person has once again struck again
with a vengeance on crime taking
out would would have been a fatal
armed robbery at a mid town
bank....

NEWS REPORTER 4
The fem feline strikes again, as
she squashes an illegal
pornography ring in Brooklyn as
she raided a local warehouse
containing evidence....

NEWS REPORTER 3
What the NYPD couldn't do this fem
fatale has taking about alleged
mob boss Vincenzo Gullari of the
dreaded Gulliari clan that have
terrorized the east side of
Brooklyn for years..

NEWS REPORTER 1
If they say Cats have nine lives
this one must be over the limit as
the mysterious fem feline saved 20
people in a 5 alarm fire in
Queens..


EXT. BATTERY PARK - DAY

COMMISSIONER BRADFORD Early 40'S is making a statement to
the press.

COMMISSIONER BRADFORD
This mysterious cat person woman
or whatever who has graced our
scene and has performed some
remarkable and indeed shocking
tasks in this city's history has
ever seen. Thou we don't condone
her methods at times of
vigilantism what she makes up in
pure compassion and welfare for
fellow mankind has is far
exemplary It is our wish that
this mysterious creature stop
hiding in the shadows and come
forward to know that the State of
New York supports and applauds her
effort...


INT. NYPD HEADQUARTERS - DAY

Detective Cort is making a statement to the press.

DETECTIVE CORT
All I have to say is good riddance
to garbage. No one is going to
miss the scum of the city. Wasting
tax payers money to keep these
scum behind bars and such. She's
doing us a favor.. Only thing cat
lady.. hey let us do our jobs a
little to huh and earn our pay for
once?


EXT. THE LI BELTWAY - NIGHT

A lavish limo is speeding past several slower moving
vehicles.


INT. LIMO CONTINUOUS - NIGHT

At the front driving is WINTHORP the chauffeur Late
30'S-Early 40's. In the backseat drinking a cup of scotch is
KYLE VAN DOREN. Mid-Late 30's.KYLE'S car phone rings he
answers it.

KYLE
Talk to me.. Oh.. I'm mad at you..
Complete waste of my time this
evening..... When will you stop
setting me up with all these meat
market affairs. .The woman..
B-O-R-I-N-G. They have nothing
going for them.... Yes.. Well I
want you.. in... the.. main office
first thing Monday morning....
We'll discuss the Trafalger Merger
later. Ciao.

He hangs up exasperated.

WINTHROP
I take it another failure of an
evening sir.

KYLE
Tell me truthfully Winthrop. You
would think the worlds most
eligible bachelor, millionaire
tycoon of one of the largest
industries in the world would be
able to his compatible mate. But
it seems that this on this earth
there are nothing but fake
idealistic women. They are all
hiding a mask.. Everyone of them
always some agenda.

WINTHROP
Yes sire. It is a little
unfortunate.

KYLE
I've been on twice as many outings
as the bachelor in one season and
all of them no match. I'm
beginning to think there is no one
out there. I might as well just be
content and give up fishing.

WINTHROP
If you think that is best sir.

KYLE
I don't know. All I know it's
late, I'm drunk horny as hell and
pissed. Alert the gate we're
heading in.

The limo pulls up to a lavish mansion and estate.


INT. KYLE'S MANSION- BEDCHAMBER CONTINUOUS - NIGHT

Kyle is in a deep sleep it is late night. The window opens
and an eerie mist rolls in two figures silent enter the bed
chambers through the French windows. They are two young
females Early 20's. Their skins are pale with black
lipstick. They look at the sleeping Conrad and slowly move
to him.

They get closer to the bed and move silently. Kyle is still
sleeping when they move closer to him. One of them grabs his
mouth and covers it they other grabs him. He awakens with a
startle as one of the girls silences him to be silent and
another bears her glowing eyes and sharp fangs she is a
vampire.


INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT

Feline swings in from the balcony and lands on the terrace.
She activates one of the emeralds on her belt and transforms
back into Alina. Alina enters her ritzy apartment after a
night on patrol. She checks her answering service for
messages. And removes her street clothes. She moves to the
refrigerator and grabs something a bottle of water and a
microwave dinner. She pops it in the microwave and flicks on
the 42 flat screen. On it are news reports about the
continuous activities of the the mysterious Feline. She
relaxes in her recliner about to relax when the appearance
of Schkmet is revealed.

ALINA
Great goddess. To whom do I owe
this honor?

SCKHMET
I am pleased you have utilized
your calling the greater of
mankind. But there is something I
forgot to reveal to you. Which is
most important.

Sckhmet waves her hand over the TV screen the channel
changes automatically to another station where an attractive
man is delivering a report Mid 30's. African American. He is
similar to Alina's deceased husband Walt.

ALINA
(emotional)
Oh my god. W.W.Walt. WALT!?? But..
But...

SCKHMET
Bears the resemblance but no far
from him. This man needs your
assistance.

ALINA
What the mayor of New York needs
my help how can he..

SCKHMET
He just had a recent loss his wife
and daughter were killed in an
alleged auto accident last month.
The mayor has made numerous
enemies over the time he has been
in office. It was believed to have
been an accident but it could have
been some thing worse.

ALINA
They were actaully murdered?

SCKHMET
I cannot say. All there is is
their could have been more at
stake. Even the man hides a rough
persona, inside he is there is
tremendous guilt and pain. That is
why you can relate to him for you
for you still at times mask that
guilt and pain for your own loss.

ALINA
So you are saying that we could be
compatible?

SCKHMET
You must seek that in your heart.
I promised that you would share in
happiness again. Perhaps this
could be the answer you seek.

The volume raises on the television and ROMAN NELSON speaks
during an interview.

ROMAN
First I want to extend a hearty
thank you to all those who
expressed their condolences during
these hard times to myself and my
family. These tragic circumstances
have only made me stronger in the
resolve to these people of this
great city that we shall continue
and prevail. That indeed if the
rumors that are speculating are
indeed true. I vow to bring forth
those thoroughly and responsible
and proceed to prosecute them
with every ounce and fiber that
the justice system allows. I also
leave a message for the feline.
Your courage inspires us all. May
others follow by your examples of
all that is right and just..

The goddess fades. Alina is watching the screen with
interest and compassion.

ALINA
See you soon mayor.


EXT. MANSION - NIGHT

An elegant estate in the outskirts of the city.


INT. MANSION - NIGHT

Kyle is asleep on a bed in a chamber. He slowly comes to and
stirs about.. The door opens and an elegant female enters
Late 30'-Early 40's. BARONESS TALIA HEINZER.

BARONESS
Ah Mr.Van Doren you have awakened
finally.

KYLE
What do you mean? Who are you?
Where am I? What is this place.

BARONESS
Such questions. All will be
answered in time I assure you.

KYLE
No! You will answer them now. Do
you know who I am? I will.

BARONESS
You will do nothing but be still
and remain calm you are our guest.

KYLE
Guest? Listen I have people in
powerful places. If this is some
sort of ..

The Baroness eyes glow red as she speaks.

BARONESS
SILENCE!

Her glare mesmerizes him as he is in a silent state.

BARONESS
You have been bought here as part
of a business proposition.

KYLE
Proposition?

BARONESS
I am Baroness Talia Heinzer. My
family the Heinzers have been the
most powerful influential people
throughout the world for over 300
years. In fact this estate is over
500 years old.

KYLE
I..I don't understand.

BARONESS
You see Mr. Doren we are not
exactly of the human persuasion

KYLE
W.What.. T.That girl before she
kidnapped me her. her. eyes were.
glowing, red...

The Baroness eyes glow.

KYLE
MY GOD. Y. Y. You.. WHAT ARE YOU
PEOPLE?

BARONESS
(slight laughter)
Come Mr. Doren. I think that's
pretty obvious..

She exposes her razor sharp fangs.

KYLE
OH MY GOD. YOU'RE YOU'RE
VAMPIRES!!

The two girls that have previously taken Kyle reappear. They
are also in their vampire form they are ANYA and KYRIA.

ANYA
He looks so attractive mistress.

KYRIA
Can we mistress please just a
little taste.

BARONESS
ABSOLUTELY NOT! Now go back to
your duties as you were commanded.

The girls hurry off.

BARONESS
Youth. So undisciplined. Lacks
direction.

Kyle reaches into his jacket pocket and removes a pistol.

KYLE
Ok stop right there. This may not
kill you but it will sure hurt
like hell.

The Baroness strikes quickly like a jungle cat. Kicking the
gun out of Kyle's hands.

BARONESS
YOU BRING A WEAPON INTO THIS
HOUSE. YOU DEFY.

She strikes him with lighting fast moves and roundhouse
kicks him he flies across the room and crashes into the
wall. She quickly moves to him and belts him again and kicks
him he flies across the other part of the room and crashes
into the wall. She quickly moves to him again as he is
groggy from the assault. She lifts him by his neck into the
air.

BARONESS
Now are you going to behave or do
I have to get ANGRY.

KYLE
A.A.Anything. Anything. Please,
please.

She releases him.

BARONESS
We'll talk more later after you've
cooled off.

She leaves leaving him winded and bewildered.


EXT. THE MAYORS MANSION - NIGHT

A figure athletically maneuvers through the back entrances
and breaks through to the rooftop.


INT. MAYORS MANSION - NIGHT

Roman has made his way to the bedroom.

ROMAN
(speaking into
communicator.)
Beth inform everyone that I am not
be to be disturbed for the rest of
the evening. Only in an extreme
emergency please.

He removes his suit jacket and unloosens his tie. He slowly
sinks on the bed exhausted. He removes a picture of his wife
and daughter and other family members in happier times at
Disney World from off the dresser and looks at them in
great sorrow.

ROMAN
Oh.. My sweet. My sweet... I..
Miss you.. so... why.. why...
did... you.. w-w-why....

The emotion rises him the throws the picture against the
mirror it shatters. He covers his face in anguish.

FELINE (OS)
I know how you feel Mr Mayor.

He whirls startled and sees a pair of glowing
greenish/yellow eyes as a figure hangs suspended from a high
ceiling beam. Feline leaps down and lands on her feet.

ROMAN
(shocked)
Y.. Y..You.. You're ....

FELINE
(jokingly)
Cat woman? Feline Fatale, I've
heard them all before.

He rushes to his security device but Felines gymnastic
agility stops him she leaps on him and the crash to the
floor she mounts him.

FELINE
Now we don't want to that do we?

ROMAN
You're going to kill me do it. I
have nothing to live for my life
is gone. I have nothing.

FELINE
You are wrong Mr Mayor. You have
so much.

She gets off him. He gets up a little winded.

ROMAN
Y. You pack quite a punch there.
You're tougher than you look.

FELINE
I get that a lot.

He looks at her closer.

ROMAN
Do I know you?

FELINE
No.. I don't believe so.

ROMAN
Strange I feel like I've known you
before I can't place where but I
have a feeling we've meet
somewhere.

FELINE
You remind me of someone I knew
long ago.

He turns on the light and she's revealed in all her
attractive form.

Feline stops him.

FELINE
Actually let's keep the lights
off.

He complies she reclines on sofa.

ROMAN
I applaud you from the fine job
you're doing cleaning up this
city. You're methods are a little
unorthodox for my tastes but if it
details the crime rate who am I to
argue. Can I offer you anything?

FELINE
I could go for some cream..

He moves to a mini fridge in the corner and removes a carton
of half and half. He give it to her.

FELINE (cont)
You think of everything..

ROMAN
It's always good to prepared just
in case. Well I gather this isn't
a social call.

FELINE
You've heard the rumors that were
speculating the past few weeks
about your families death.

He is shocked and slowly moves to the window and looks out
over the city skyscrape.

ROMAN
A person in my position makes
friends and makes enemies. I knew
the risks and so did my family. If
you could see the thousands of
threats, death notices I've
received over the years. There
were close calls, mostly false
alarms, but somehow they managed
to get through the cracks and get
the one thing that mattered to me
in this whole damn world. Now
they're gone and I feel that these
bastards have won.

FELINE
You must never feel like that Mr
Mayor. That's what they want for
you to quit.

ROMAN
Sometimes I feel like I can't go
on. It's so much. To much at
times. Look at you, you are a
legend or so and there is still
evil in the world.

FELINE
There will always be evil. I was
like you at one point. Had
happiness and then in a blink of
an eye it was all taken in a
flash.

She pauses

FELINE (cont)
So who do you think you think may
have murdered your family Mr
Mayor?

ROMAN
Please call me Roman. Well I'm
sure you heard of Mackenzie Ross.
Mac The Knife. The head of the
reputed Rossarelii Family.

FELINE
From what I hear about on the news
and other sources.

ROMAN
The Rossarelii's were heavily
involved with some property deal
development on the by the water
front. Rumors have it that some of
the contractors were taking a
payoff to scam the funds the city
was giving them in order cut
corners in the construction field.
Well a whistle blower found and
came to me. I threatened to expose
this underhandedness. A Few weeks
prior Ross paid a visit to me
personally threatened that if I
blow this deal that would be
fatal. I threatened him that if
any harm came to me or my family
that the info would be revealed
and he would going down. Well he
took that with a grain of salt. I
did my duty as the mayor of the
city and revealed the corruption.
Let's say their were a lot of
pissed off parties. And millions
gone. The day of I received a
mysterious e-mail with a deaths
head and that was that.

ROMAN
And now I've received word that
Kyle Van Doren has mysteriously
disappeared a few days ago. He
was the head of this whole
operation. And the Van Doren name
has a mighty huge influence in
this sate considering his uncle is
Senator.

FELINE
So you think they could be
related.

KYLE
I have no doubt.

FELINE
Then I'll check it out.

ROMAN
And if indeed it is true. Then..
spare no mercy..

FELINE
That's what I do.

She leaps up to window.

ROMAN
How can I contact you.

FELINE
I'll contact you.

She leaps out into the night. He looks after her.


INT. MANSION - DAY

The corridors are dark and the whole place is dark as
candles are drawn about. The windows have been boarded up
and such. Kyle is being escorted by two other vampire girls
CINDY and JULIA early 20'S.He is taken to the Baroness
Chamber.

CINDY
Here he is devine Mistress.

JULIA
In all his plump glory.

They laugh as they close the chamber doors.

BARONESS
I trust you have been treated well
Mr. Van Doren.

KYLE
Considering I haven't seen
daylight for about 2 weeks yeah.
You know there are people
searching. And I'm you know of
this heroine Feline.

BARONESS
Those are irrelevant to me.. Did
you think about my offer.

KYLE
Yeah so basically you've taken
over and influenced some of the
most powerful people on the planet
and controlled all their actions,
that you have these conglomerate
over these companies and basically
you threatened them into doing
your bidding. Now you want me to
join this empire. That will make
me billions in a short period of
time?

BARONESS
You get the idea.

KYLE
You're a woman after my own heart
Power. Okay so what's our profit.
50/50 split?

BARONESS
Usually it's 70/30. But since I
find you.. so... attractive..
We'll be partners.

KYLE
Did you just say you find.. me..
attractive?

The Baroness comes to him seductively.

BARONESS
Come now Mr Doren. I'm sure you've
heard that a million times from
women all around the world such as
a person in your position.

KYLE
Yes but.. not like the way you
said it.. You sounded.. I don't
know truthful.. something I've
never gotten from Women.

BARONESS
So.. you feel it to??

KYLE
Yeah.. All this time I've never
found a woman such like you so....
lovely and truthful. lovely...

They embrace a moment of passion.


INT. OFFICE - DAY

ALINA is at her desk trying to attain info about MacKenzie
and his illegal activities. See looks at a report and
downloads it. She is interrupted by an appearance by
DETECTIVE CORT and ROMAN.

DETECTIVE CORT
Alina come over a minute.

Alina stops her work and comes into Cort's area. She is
stunned when she meets Roman.

DETECTIVE CORT
Your honor this is Alina. Alina is
our aide in obtaining suspected
info and analyzing data.

He shakes her hand. He looks at her.

ROMAN
I'm very glad to meet you. You
look familiar sure we haven't meet
somewhere previous?

ALINA
I-I don't think so sir.

ROMAN
Hmm strange. Something tells me we
have.

DETECTIVE CORT
The mayor is here to get all info
we have on this Feline character.

ALINA
Oh, is something wrong? And why do
you come ask me about it.

ROMAN
I just heard you were the top
person tracking this case. You had
a lot of knowledge your reports
were very detailed. It seems like
you personally know this person.

ALINA
Oh I just have that keen eye
everyone tells me. But why the
interest Mr Mayor.

The mayor gives a signal for Cort to leave him and Alina
alone in the office for a moment.

ROMAN
(whispering)
Off the record? I feel I can trust
you for some reason. I fell that
that you have that connection. I
feel that I have.. someone what of
a .. a bond with her.

ALINA
A. Bond with her?

ROMAN
I know it sounds crazy. But she
actually came to see me a couple
of weeks ago. Explaining she might
be able to assist in investigating
my families mysterious deaths, but
it wasn't an accident it was
murder.

ALINA
(shaken)
Oh..

ROMAN
And investigating the
disappearance of the billionaire
tycoon Kyle Van Doren. She said
she would be in touch but I
haven't heard from her in a while
and was wondering was she still.

ALINA
On the case.

ROMAN
Yes that and I can't explain it.
It's like a think I'm forming a
bond with her but that's crazy. I
hardly know her. But I haven't
felt that close to anybody since
my wife's death.

Alina looks away and walks toward the door.

ALINA
One thing about her She doesn't
operate by society's standards.
She never breaks a promise
especially if it's justice.

Roman observes her for a moment.

ROMAN
That's reassuring to know..

ALINA
Mr Mayor.

ROMAN
Please.. Call me Roman.

ALINA
Oh okay Roman. Well we'll see what
we can do. Any info you'll be the
first to know.

ROMAN
That would be greatly appreciated.
Listen would you..

Cort interrupts the conversation.

DETECTIVE CORT
Sorry Mr Mayor. We just got a hot
tip of some activity going down at
the waterfront tonight. Could be
the Rosselli clan.

Roman breaks away from Alina quickly and rushes to join the
other NYPD activity.


INT. BARONESS BED CHAMBERS - NIGHT

Baroness and Kyle are laying in bed. Kyle is partially
clothed and the Baroness stays covered by the sheets.

KYLE
I feel so free.. So free that was
just...

Baroness covers his mouth.

BARONESS
You don't have to say anymore.

KYLE
W.W.What did you do to me?

BARONESS
Nothing you could have done
yourself. I just released you
thats all. All that stress
pressure, aggravation was just
building up. I could tell.. You
were killing yourself.

KYLE
So you saved me from self
destruction is that it?

BARONESS
And more.

Kyle sits up in bed.

KYLE
This is crazy. I mean.. This.. Us
I keep thinking this some crazy
dream. That all of this never
existed. That.. This.. This..
can't be possible.

Baroness slowly caresses him.

BARONESS
Can a dream do this? Or this or
make you feel search your heart
what is it telling you.

Kyle falters as the Baroness slowly seduces him lower into
bed.

KYLE
It's telling me.. It's telling
me...
It's... It's... s-a-y--

He collapses back under the covers.


INT. WATERFRONT PIER - NIGHT

A murky night. Feline athletically gymnastically lands on
the rooftop of a warehouse. She looks around her eyes glow
through the light fog. Her sense of hearing picks up some
senses. She sees some men loading a boat. She races to the
rooftop edge of the pier and leaps off. A guard taking a
smoke break takes a puff and looks up only to see two feet
smashing into his face as Feline lands on her feet. Another
guard is passing by Feline pauses runs and leaps on him he
is surprised as her weight tackles them both to the ground.
She wrestles him into a storage area and knocks him
unconscious with some savage punches. She looks up and sees
that cargo is being loaded onto a yacht. She grabs surprises
another guard by delivering a stunning karate chop across
his neck that flattens him out.


INT. YACHT - NIGHT

Two HENCH PERSON'S VINNY and CLYDE Mid 30's-40's. Are
maintaining. operation of the ship.

VINNY
What the hells going on? Units 3
and 4 aren't responding.

CLYDE
I'll go check it out.

VINNY
Good we've got a deadline to meet.


EXT. YACHT - NIGHT

Feline leaps over the railing of the yacht and lands on her
feet. Another guard spots her. She grabs the railing and
shoots her feet out as the impact collides with his jaw he
falls flat. Two more guards spot her.

GUARD 1
Oh shit. It's that Feline.

GUARD 2
Crap.

FELINE
This boats dry docked boys.

Guard 1 tries to draw his gun. Feline leaps and her right
foot collides with his face. Guard 2 tries to draw his gun.
Feline retaliates with a hard right punch which rocks his
head back from the blow but the gun goes off creating an
alert. Several more guards are drawn to the alert. Feline
leaps and delivers a roundhouse knocking 3 guards out.
Another tries to come at her from behind. She shoots her
foot out from behind her and her foot collides with his rib
cage as sounds of SNAP are heard. Another one rushes at her.
She stops him short with a couple of hard punches from her
fists. Clyde rushes towards her leveling his gun.

CLYDE
Alright cat bitch, your ass is g-

Before he can level his weapon at her. She leaps and
somersaults toward him. Her feet smash into his face and the
gun goes off and hits the tank spilling fuel into the water.


INT. YACHT-NIGHT - CONTINUOUS

The alert signals on the ships control panel. INSERT reads
FLUID DAMAGE, FLUID DAMAGE.

VINNY
What the hell?

He goes out to investigate but a pair of feet come sailing
into the cabin knocking him back over board. He crashes as
Feline comes into frame. Vinny looks at her and grins
wickedly. He removes an iron bar and slashes at her. She
dodges it. He attempts again and swipes it at her. She
gymnastically evades it and strikes him with her foot in a
handstand kick he drops the bar. He charges her again. She
strikes with him with some savage punches. He comes at her
again she grabs him by the neck and with a heave judo tosses
him he crashes against the control panel. Staggered and
bleeding he comes towards her again. She grabs him falls
backward with her legs supporting his weight and with a
strong heave of her legs tosses him he falls over her and
crashes against the radio destroying it and creating a dent
in the hull. Before she can rise she leaps on him and pins
him down. Her claws now form in her hands.

FELINE
(sniffing
detecting him)
Your just a flunky doing the man's
bidding.

VINNY
(groggily)
W.W.Wh.. mack truck hit me.

She grabs him.

FELINE
I take it your not delivering for
goodwill and the cargo is not
Starbucks. Wheres Rosserlli. I
won't ask again.

She sheds her claws as her eyes glow. A frightened Vinny
shakes his head in compliance.



FADE OUT.
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Re: FELINE SCRIPT

A great story, I'm anxious to see the moment when the feline faced vampires, I think certainly the scenes to make this fight very hot
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